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Sonic Rainboom

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Nolita doing a Sonic Rainboom just like Rainbow Dash!!!

Wow, three submissions in one day... xD
Well, they were all unfinished drawings, so I thought I'd finish them all up today! ~

Nolita belongs to me.
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Woo hoo! Critique time! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d…" width="21" height="15" alt=":dummy:" title="I am a dummy!"/>

Oookay. So, first off: Lineart. It's a little messy. I'm not sure what program you use, so I can't give you any tips... if you use paint tool SAI/ MS paint, use the curve tool, and maybe make it thicker... or maybe another color like dark blue/brown. Otherwise, I dunno how to help you.

Coloring: Well, it's good, but you really only shaded in the parts that were that purpley blue color. It doesn't look like you spent much time on it at ALL. And maybe put more of the shading in the hair... it's barely visible. The background is great though! maybe make some of the clouds bigger or fluffier looking though. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Anatomy: We all hate it, right? Lol. Anyway. I couldn't help but noticing that the fist is all wrong. It's upside down and just looks flat. Flip the part with the lines and put the thumb under it. It looks VERY uncomfortable. The breasts are a little too big... I think you know what to do there. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..."/> The arm on my right looks like it just disappeared behind her head. At least show a LITTLE bit of the hand there. The legs look very small as well. unless she's like, 10 feet tall. But I don't think this is the case, is it? Well, you fix that by simply making them longer so they look closer!

Great work. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c…" width="20" height="20" alt=":clap:" title="Clap"/>

Hope this helped!~ <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt=":aww:" title="Aww"/>